i dreamt.
i saw you.
i woke up.
i still saw you.
in a dark square frame.
i closed my eyes.
i felt your touch.
i heard you breath.
slow, steady,
the cold breath of death.
breaking the quiet,
the warm silence of my love.
About Me
- sabnam
- i listen, i talk. i feel, i write. big mistakes, bigger passions. tall limits, taller dreams. thats me.....
1 comment:
First of all remember this is just my feelings and impressions I got; and don't even bother of what is written here.
This love theme strikingly connects me to the Saavariya - one true love thingy you were talking about. Also here since you have not bothered about the rhyme (much like in my poems); it shows that you are more focussed on expressing the thoughts - which I feel is a real good sign.
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